She uses their writing as a funnel to complain about her life and dissatisfaction. Apart from the first email Stacey NEVER AGAIN asks him about him. Daniel starts writing back to her and our story ensues. This isn\’t a spoiler, it is obvious by the cover and in chapter one who she talks to. Her love interest ends up being someone else entirely. She reaches out to a former flame that she never really got to know.
Stacey is so unhappy that she does decide to do something about it. Second, reading about everyday things we all do is boring. It is easier to give straight facts rather than show emotion. First, we are told all these facts which I feel is lazy writing.
She goes to work, watches over her mother and looks at her former friends lives vicariously on social media. She is stuck in neutral, going through the motions. Due to the author\’s skill, it wasn\’t a total bust, but pretty close. She has the talent, she can write well developed, consistent characters and write a good story. DeLuca needed to go back into the story and flesh it out, give it more detail, add to it. Well Played read like a good first draft/rough outline to me.
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